"Literally some of the best feedback I've received over the course of about a dozen screenplays."
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- Ivo Raza - Writer/Director
Feedback
The secret to a ‘successful’ script today is creating characters we care about, knowing what aspect of the human condition you're exploring, and connecting emotionally with your pages.
Relying on ‘story’ or an imaginative ‘world’ is not enough.
That unique emotional authenticity is your ‘voice’. It’s what attracts attention, and it’s really freaking hard to do.
My aim is to empower you to make the most of your idea, and your skills.
Founder/Head Judge Tim Schildberger at one of our Live Events, offering feedback to writers with our friend Jason Alexander
"The hour I spent Zooming with Tim was one of the most productive feedback sessions I have ever had. His input was specific, thought-provoking, and honest. He showed me a way forward with my story when I was feeling very stuck. I am now very excited to write my script."
- Candy Fox - May, 2024
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" Tim has helped sharpen many of my scripts by pinpointing what needs work and providing specific fixes for the rewrite. He has the gift of finding the emotional essence of a story even if it is hidden under pages of first draft bloat. Highly recommend."
- Shawn Boxe - Writer, Silicon Valley (HBO)
Feedback Options
The Idea
Let’s discuss your idea. We’ll talk over coffee/zoom/phone with a focus on what aspect of the human condition you want to explore, and what you want your story to be 'about'. I’ll also give you help with next steps – constructing the all-important outline.
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​Fee: 1 hour - $125
"Tim has a keen eye for spotting vulnerabilities in story, pacing, and structure. His feedback on several of my scripts has been invaluable. I highly recommend his services for those that are serious about taking their work to the next level."
- Lloyd Gilyard Jr. - Writer, The Good Doctor (ABC)
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"Tim got to the heart of some key areas where my script needed improvement and delivered very actionable notes. So much so that I couldn't wait to get back into the fray and get to work! I'm very glad to have found Tim's help"
​- Stephen Shapiro - Write LA 2023 Entrant
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Written Feedback
I read your script, and deliver substantive written feedback. You’ll learn what’s working, and I’ll point out areas of opportunity to make the next draft even stronger.
The goal is to improve your chances of making a memorable impact in competitions and with industry people - Agents, Literary Managers, Producers and prospective Talent.
Fee: $190
(Pilot or Feature) Notes delivered within 7 days.
Read and Chat
I read your script, deliver substantive written notes, then we chat over zoom/phone/coffee about whatever you want to discuss.
Read + 30 min chat (zoom/phone only): $290
Read + 60 min chat: $360
Notes delivered within 7 days.
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The Total Package
When you're really serious. I read your script, give written feedback, and we do a 60 min zoom. Then I read your next draft, and we do another 60 min zoom. Plus, you get a free copy of my book! (No fixed timetable on the rewrite read/zoom unless you like deadlines, and if we meet in person, I'll buy the coffee/champagne.)
Fee: $675
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(Pilot or Feature) Notes delivered within 7 days. ​
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" Tim’s notes cut to the heart of a matter and truly help in developing a well-rounded character and world. I absolutely value his opinion and honesty." -
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Ubah Mohammed - Writer, DC’s Legends of Tomorrow (CW), The Whispers (ABC)